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【原创/生贺】The Surprise【小天男神1103生快!

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小天男神1103生日快乐!我跳起来就是一个么么哒!
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IP属地:美国1楼2016-11-04 10:12回复
    The Surprise
    The moment I wake up, I can feel Prongs' hands covering my eyes. The soft and warm feeling only belongs to him. I'm not sure what he's up to since everything is hidden behind those hands, so I cough to make sure he knows my confusion.
    "Just wait a sec, Padfoot, it is a surprise." His voice appears above my ears, like the feeling you would get with the 3D speakers. I always doubt that he fully understands my hatred towards the darkness, I guess he knows though, otherwise he would shut down all the lights and even close the curtains instead of this silly "5-year-old covering eyes" thing. So I spoke.
    "Prongs, if you don't want to see your best friend tripping over something like a fool, or biting your fingers until you scream at the top of your lungs, just tell me what you're up to."
    I have to say we both love the small arguments and jokes, it's just the way we communicate with each other. My best friend apparently snickers under his breath, since I can feel the steady breath shakes a little, like the sound of a swirl of wind. He doesn't say anything though.
    Even though I should feel unsafe at this moment, I'm not nervous at all. A little bit, maybe, but there's apparently more excitement. The fact that James is right beside me brings me comfort, just as always. He almost never lie to me, probably a few ones, but just for fun. As he leads me going down the stairs of our dorms--I can always recognize this way even when I'm "blind"--I'm getting more and more excited to see what Prongs is been up to. Obviously Remus and Peter also have took place in it, otherwise they would come and ask what's happening. But for today, I haven't heard their voices after I wake up. Not even footsteps.
    Now we are walking towards what's probably the Gryffindor common room, the feeling of granite on the floor of the corridor makes me shiver a little--I'm walking with bare foot. James notices that, and several seconds later, the warmth of my robes wraps me up. Weird, that really helps.
    As we are getting closer to the common room, more sounds start to appear. I'm estimating what's happening with my ears--chairs moving, people walking, and Remus' voice jumps out all of a sudden: "They're here!"
    Okay, I guess there's a lot of people in the common room right now.
    So James guides me to the door, but before we do anything, he asks, both to the people inside and to me: "Are you ready?"
    I smile.
    And we open the door together when James uncovers my eyes.
    Candles, smiley faces, music, and a giant cream cake in the middle.
    I realize that today is my birthday.
    The room is filled with people, and "happy birthday"s to me. James now stands in the middle, with Remus and Peter on each side. He hands a huge bouquet of flowers to me, with the smile that I'm too familiar with.
    "Happy birthday, Padfoot."
    And I smile in return.
    ----END----


    IP属地:美国2楼2016-11-04 10:12
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      前言的最后一句Spanish翻译:The pleasure is mine.
      【无关紧要的Spanish练习。


      IP属地:美国3楼2016-11-04 10:13
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        你……你能不能上翻译?


        IP属地:浙江来自手机贴吧4楼2018-06-29 21:49
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          突然醒来的那一刻,我能感觉到尖头叉子的手覆盖了我的眼睛。柔软和温暖的感觉只属于他。我不知道他在忙些什么,因为一切都是隐藏在那些手,所以我咳嗽,以确保他知道混乱。“稍等一下,大脚板,这是一个惊喜。”他的声音出现在我耳边,就像感觉你会得到3 d扬声器。我总是怀疑他完全理解我的憎恨黑暗,我想他知道,否则他会关闭所有的灯,甚至关闭窗帘,而不是这愚蠢的“5岁的覆盖眼睛”的事情。所以我说。“尖头叉子,如果你不想看到你最好的朋友绊倒的东西像个傻瓜,或者咬你的手指,直到你尖叫你的肺部的顶端,只要告诉我你做什么。”我不得不说我们都爱的小参数和笑话,这是我们相互沟通的方式。我最好的朋友显然士力架在他的呼吸,因为我能感觉到稳定呼吸摇,像漩涡的风的声音。虽然他没有说什么。即使此刻我应该感到不安全,我不紧张。一点,也许,但是显然更兴奋。詹姆斯是在我身边给我安慰,只是一如既往地。他几乎从不对我撒谎,可能几人,但只是为了好玩。他让我下楼梯的我们的宿舍,我总是能认出这种方式即使“盲目”——我越来越兴奋看到尖头叉子是什么了。显然雷穆斯和彼得也有发生,否则他们会过来问发生了什么。但今天,我醒来后没有听到他们的声音。甚至连脚步。现在我们可能什么格兰芬多公共休息室走去,走廊的花岗岩地板上的感觉让我颤抖,我光着脚走路。詹姆斯注意到,几秒钟之后,我的长袍包裹的温暖我。奇怪,真的有帮助。当我们越来越接近公共休息室,更多的声音开始出现。我估计我的耳朵有什么发生,椅子移动,人们步行,Remus的声音突然跳出来:“他们来了!”好吧,我想有很多人现在在公共休息室。所以詹姆斯引导我到门口,但是在我们做任何事之前,他问道,里面的人和我:“你准备好了吗?”我的微笑。和我们一起打开门时,詹姆斯发现我的眼睛。蜡烛、笑脸、音乐和中间一个巨大的奶油蛋糕。我意识到今天是我的生日。房间里挤满了人,“生日快乐”给我。詹姆斯现在站在中间,两边雷穆斯和彼得。他对我手一大束花,我太熟悉的微笑。“生日快乐,大脚板。”我微笑返回。- - - - - - - - - -结束


          来自Android客户端5楼2018-08-13 17:51
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            问度娘要的翻译


            来自Android客户端6楼2018-08-13 17:52
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              快夸我快夸我


              来自Android客户端7楼2018-08-13 17:52
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                好吧说实话发完之后我看了一遍,然后我就蒙了,看不懂


                来自Android客户端8楼2018-08-13 17:58
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                  同上,666


                  来自Android客户端9楼2019-02-15 22:46
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